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How to Create Tension That Keeps Readers Hooked

No matter the genre, tension keeps readers turning pages. Here’s how to build it like a pro.

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Miranda M
Jan 28, 2025
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Tension is the heartbeat of storytelling. Whether it’s a simmering unease in a quiet thriller or the high-stakes drama of an epic fantasy, tension keeps readers glued to your story.

Tension isn’t about what happens so much as how you make the reader feel. Here are three techniques to master tension-building:

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1. Raise Questions Without Immediate Answers

Introduce mysteries or conflicts early on and leave breadcrumbs instead of resolutions. Example:

  • “She paused at the door, her hand hovering above the handle. On the other side, everything would change.”
    Make readers wonder: What’s behind the door? Why is it so significant?

2. Pace the Reveal

Tension thrives in the balance between giving too little and too much. Tease details, but hold back the full picture. Let the reader piece it together.

  • Instead of: “He knew the secret.”

  • Try: “The words on the page blurred, but he couldn’t unsee them. The truth was worse than he’d feared.”

3. Play with Contrasts

Juxtapose calm moments with sharp bursts of action or revelation. This contrast makes the tension hit harder. Example: A family dinner scene interrupted by a sudden knock at the door.

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